NOTE:
As of 1st January 2005
John Trenhaile will be
offering a more limited service.
Please familiarise yourself
with the changes on the
page entitled 'Significant Alterations.'
Within an agreed timescale I will complete a full report
containing my assessment of how you handle structure,
storyline, character, scenes, and atmosphere; comments
on your writing style; an analysis of the strengths and
weaknesses of your work; suggestions for improvements;
and the answers to any questions you have posed.
At that point, you will be invoiced for the balance of the fee.
On receipt of your cheque, I will send your work back to you
with my report. If after that you would like to take things further,
we can discuss the next steps. In cases of exceptionally talented
work, they may include referring you to one of several firms of
reputable literary agents with whom I have long-standing connections.
Do not hesitate to contact me for more detailed information.
I’m inviting you to take a big step forward in your writing career.
It’s not the sort of thing that should be undertaken with eyes shut.
"Nobody can guarantee to find you a publisher.
But I can make your work better."
Copyright © 2005 John Trenhaile Critiques. All rights reserved. Revised: December 14, 2004 .