“I feel I have been given a masterclass on thriller-writing.
… You have given me a considerable boost.”
-- (I.S., Edinburgh)
“Your comments about the characters and the structure of
the book are clearly the result of a thorough and detailed scrutiny
of the text on your part – for all of which many thanks. These are
particularly helpful coming from someone who, having gone through
the mill himself, knows what he is talking about!”
-- (A.W., Sussex)
“Even though you were very tough at times it was overall a motivating
response and a nice early Xmas present. … As for the critical points
raised, they were exactly what I needed and have highlighted to me
very clearly where I was going wrong. Believe me, I feel the money has
been well spent.”
-- (D.N., Lincolnshire)
“Many thanks for the excellent critique. … [It] is almost everything I would
have expected from an ex-barrister: detailed, comprehensive, cogent, and
scrupulously fair. (Well, maybe not all ex-barristers.) … The simple but
effective structure of the report made it a pleasure to read and nearly all
the points you raised were valid.”
-- (D.W., Essex)
“Your efforts cannot be faulted. You could not go any deeper or be more specific.
Obviously a tremendous amount of thought and work has gone into it.”
-- (L.L., Oxfordshire)